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Lookin good

Usually I'm not a sprite flash fan and I avoid them altogether, but you did such a decent job I felt commenting was necessary.
Music was great, sinc was spot on, and the animation was flawless. Obvious amount of effort here.
This intro was better than most people's full length flashes. Looking forward to the final product.

Congrats on 1st

This is one of the better first's I've seen in a while. It shows evidence of actual effort and a modicum of ability for story telling. Usually I cringe and grind my teeth when somebody puts in the author's comments "this is my first," but this time 'round was different.
Other than polishing up some of your character design (although the skeleton was very well done) I have no criticism. Just continue to make more and learn as you go on your own. You made a good first go of it.

Somebody once said to me

"The Shades Gang are not just a group of young kids with no originallity who make spam for the portal."
They lied.
Constructive criticism:
Do more than 4 frames and clip art.

A little more effort

Using clips and pics from actual anime was kind of a cheesy way to add filler, next time try doing the entire thing by your own hand. Otherwise it did show a bit of creativity and originality. Sound quality wasn't that bad, and it does ring with a certain tone of nostalgia.
The only thing I would recommend fixing would be the "shadow font." It looked amateur-ish and just wasn't doing it for me. Otherwise, fair animation and decent effort.

unit02 responds:

about the shdow font, in the flash it look OK
but in the SWF file it gets messed up
i dont know why.....

Sounds like me on a Friday night

The moment I saw that talking fuckstick sleeze up to the bar and drop the 2nd worse pick-up line in history I clicked "vote 5."
This made my day.

You made my day

For some time now I have been sarcastically commenting that a majority of NG's submissions contain stereotypical elements; horible DBZ sprites, stick figures fighing with kai powers, terrible-to-no backgrounds, bad grammar and Linkin Park music.
Now I have living proof.
This made my day.

Goku159 responds:

Actualy it had a backround but i dun know wat the hell hapend >.<

That's not fair

If there's a contest for best X-Mas flash, this might have already be a winner.
4 weeks early to boot.
You didn't give anyone else a chance! lolz...
Excellent cartoon.
Happy Holiday.

RayRay28576 responds:

Thanx. I hope you're right, lol. But It probably won't even make front page. If I made front page, I would feel like a winner, lol. I really appreciate the compliments, and I'm glad you like it. Thank you.

Ideas

- fix sound quality on first scene

- make character chins a little less pointy

- keep using Tenatious D!!!!1!!11!one!

seriously, the D rocks.

I vote 3/5 just for that

Sublime

Every element in this flash blended smoothly to create a zone of pure leisure.
A suave reminder that the simpler things in life are more creative sometimes.
Frosting.
4/5, 9/10

Meaningful

Kid, this was the most meaningful thing I've ever seen on Newgrounds.
It shows a level of maturity lost on the youth of today, of any day.
You seem wise beyond your years.
Keep searching for that truth.
People spend their entire lives trying to find the answer, but never do.
The best one can hope for is to simply come to a better understanding of it and make peace within themselves.

If there is any justice in the world, Tom will front-page this and not let it fall into obscurity.

mickane responds:

Hey, Thanks for the review..

Soo glad u enjoyed this :D

This makes he happy to read what u just wrote..

Thanks =D

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